Sylvia Plath first worked on her short story called "The Smoky Blue Piano" in the fall of 1954, possibly for her short story writing course with Alfred Kazin. By the 27th of December 1954, she was rewriting it. She submitted it to the Ladies Home Journal the following day and it was rejected in January 1955 with a personal note. She rewrote it and sent it back out, but it was rejected again in February because it famously lacked an "indefinable something" ( LV1 881). Plath, ever the diligent and persistent writer, was at work on the story again on 12 August 1955 when she sent it to Woman's Day (per her pocket diary) and experimented with hair styles. She maintained a list of periodicals to which she sent "The Smoky Blue Piano", and this included McCall's , Collier's , The American , Cosmopolitan , Good Housekeeping , and the Woman's Home Companion . The 12 August submission, per this list, says Everywoman's , not Woman's Day . ...
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